Good work. I like her expression. Only I miss a little more details and shadows under her eyes. I like very much her hair. +6/7

thank you.

Beautiful figure. I like the skintones. Her nose and mouth have depth, but the eyes look flat...I can't describe it. Still very beautiful.

The girl is very pretty. The problem with the eyes is that they are too wide open. They are supposed to be that sized but the white part should be much smaller. Normally, eyelashes cover the upper part of the eye, and there's always a red thingy at the corners of the eyes, you should add it. and, also, about the eye again, there's normally a "fold" in the skin over the eyelashes.. and some shadow under. Hum, difficult to explain with words..

just look a the pic to understand what my senseless sentences mean.

The right part of the face is too curved inward, it makes her look skinny. God job for the shading but, what happened to the forehead? The hair and especially the elbow are very well done. For a work without ref, I think this is a success. Good work!
Oh, and, I've learned to use blue when I color skin. apparently, there's blue in the skin color, otherwise it looks too warm.

+8